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Sorry for any speeling errors I just turned 15 and I'm new to this but I hope you like it feel free to comment!:)


Most people know who the are by the time they are ready to die. But there are a selective few who need a reality check. They only realize who they want to be as there lying in a pool of blood. They think about what they wanted to do with there lives and who gonna remeber them when they're gone.

"Der" Meredith whispered as she walked into her husbands room in the ICU.

"Mer" He said with a faint but loving voice.

"Der are you okay? I thought I was gonna lose you!" she said as her voice began to shake.

"Mer, I'm fine but are you okay?" He asked his wife who visibly looked shaken by look of her husband.

"I'm fine baby, but I have something I need to tell you." Mer said with pain in her voice.

 Just then Cristina and Teddy walked in with smiles on there faces.

"You're a lucky man Dr. Sheperd." teddy said as she turned towads Cristina. "So are you going to tell your patient how he's doing?"

"My patient? Seriously?!" Cristina looks at Teddy in shock.

"You did perform the surgery right, because if it was Avery..."

"Of course it was me I just ummm... I can't believe he's totally my patient!" Cristina began said loud enough for the whole hospital to hear.

Cristina began to explain the post-op regulations for a major surgery without any interuptions from Meredith, about how they already knew all this stuff. Seeing as the both are doctors! She let Cristina go on and on about how he couldn't do this and wouldn't be able to do that for awhile. And then Cristina mentioned something the stopped Meredith right in her tracks.

"And Derek I know you're gonna want to do everthing for Mer for the next nine months but you have to take it easy too!" Cristina said as she looked and saw Meredith face sink.

"What are you talking about?" He asked still drosy from the pain pain killers.

"Oh you haven't told him yet, I'm sorry Mer I didn't mean to ruin the surprise." Cristina said as she saw a tear well up in Mer's eye. Then all of a sudden it her Mer had lost the baby due to all the stress of seeing Derek get shot and "die".

"Mer" Derek asked with a smile on his face. "We're having a baby?"

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is this the reall scrippttt or iss it like made upp?

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im pretty sure its made up.... But its veryyy good. please continue :)
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Disclaimer: I don't own anything the characters all belong to Sonda Rhimes

A/N: Yepp this is a made up story nothing like the real script probably!:) Hope you enjoy!:)

"Ummm...I can't," Mer sobs as she turns towards Cristina.

"Mer it's okay, you can tell me I know you didn't want a baby yet but..." Derek starts telling Meredith until she cuts him off.

"Der I want a baby too!" Mer cries

Derek realizes what going on "Oh Mer" he says in a quite voice.

"It's my fault Derek, I'm so sorry. I know th-" Mer sobs until Der interjects.

"Mer, it's not your fault. I can see you wanted this baby but the stress of today was a lot. If its anyones fault... it's mine." Derek heart began to race and Mer tried to calm him down.

"Der this is NOT your fault... The only person at fault here is Mr. Clarke! He is the one who had the gun and shot people out of his own greif!  You can't blame yourself for this because it's not you fault." Mer said those words and his heart began to slow back down to normal.

'Mer" Derek said "I love you will all my heart."

"I love you too Der."


"Mer I need to call my Mom she's probably freaking out watching the news."

"It's okay Derek I already called her she said she be here by morning." Mer told Derek amused by the look on his face.

"You called my mother? Really Mer? I'm shocked!" Mer frowned at Derek when she heard that.

"Of course I called your mother, besides I need to make a good impression... you're sisters are all coming too!" Meredith giggled at the sight of Derek face.

"My sisters are coming! Mer i think Cristina wants me to take it easy and I... umm don't think that this is such a great idea. Why don't you call them and tell them not to come."Derek asked using his eyes to plead with her.

Just then a fimiliar Face walks in.

"Mark" Mer cried running toward him to give hime a big hug.

Although Mer and Mark weren't the best of friends Mer was very glad to see he was alright.

"Wait... where is Lexie? Is she alright!?!" Mer asked immediatly when she noticed Lexie wasn't with him.

"Mer she's fine. It's Alex." Mark said with a grim look on his face.

"Alex" Mer repeated scared.


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Good story, but is here really the place for it? Not to be negative, but you'd be able to format it a lot better if you posted it on or a similar site.

Here's the link;

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i know i didnt really know where to put i tried fanfiction but i couldn't figure it out. but thanks for the suggestion

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Yes, you should try posting it on fanfic. You'll get some reviews, positive ones over there :)

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I've tried to figure fanfiction out but i cant seem to get it but i will try again:) Thanks

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this is an appropriate place for a fiction story seeing as this forum is called FAN FICTION????????????????

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Grey's Anatomy Quotes

Did you say it? 'I love you. I don't ever want to live without you. You changed my life.' Did you say it? Make a plan. Set a goal. Work toward it, but every now and then, look around; Drink it in 'cause this is it. It might all be gone tomorrow."

Meredith (closing voiceover)

There's a reason I said I'd be happy alone. It wasn't 'cause I thought I'd be happy alone. It was because I thought if I loved someone and then it fell apart, I might not make it. It's easier to be alone, because what if you learn that you need love and you don't have it? What if you like it and lean on it? What if you shape your life around it and then it falls apart? Can you even survive that kind of pain? Losing love is like organ damage. It's like dying. The only difference is death ends. This? It could go on forever.

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