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1. mumbles cit
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   mer tie note to her old bike hope that her dad would read and be able to help her. 

   what would be tile for this story and would anybody read?

   Posted 4/10/2010 9:45:54 AM #
2. mumbles cit
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   mean what would be a good title for this story and would anybody read?

   Posted 4/10/2010 9:49:03 AM #
3. McShip
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   I'm usually good with titles so let me give try this. :)... Mer tied a note to her old bike, hoping that her dad would read and be able to help her. Whoa, sounds intriguing. :)

   "Help" (Plain. :P)

   "I Need You Now"

   Wow, okay, I have never been so stumped on a title. :P

   "P.S. Love You, Mer" (Pertaining to the end of the note. :P)

   Okay, stumped now. :P Tell me a little bit more like what's supposed to be in the note. I usually have content inside my mind and then I put the title. Can't do vice versa.

   Posted 4/10/2010 11:27:42 AM #
4. mumbles cit
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   mer is 14 and has seen her dad since she was 7.  Her mom has just die.

   Posted 4/11/2010 12:36:20 PM #
5. McShip
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   "Need You Here" (Kind of like the one above. Kinda)

   "Hope" (Does the bicycle have a name? You can name it after the bicycle. LOL. Anything can have a name. :P)

   "The Cycle of Dreams" (Pertains to the bike)

   "Cycling Down Ol' _____" (Fill in the blank of a town, city, street. :P Or the bike name)

   "The Bike Message" (Does the story revolve around the bike? You can make it revolve around the bike. Lol. Pun, revolve. :P Nevermind)

   Choose one. :)

   Posted 4/11/2010 1:50:46 PM #
6. mumbles cit
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   You kind don't know want know what is note. Note doesn't make real sense.

   Posted 4/12/2010 2:01:18 PM #

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